Thursday, February 23, 2017
嘉怡:谜语诗
X
拼凑起一串棉花糖
享受温暖呵护
却有一丝忧愁
变成透明的
多愁善感的
音符
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X
哪怕是只有一分一秒
他也愿意昂首阔步
走完
他的印记
他的使命
直到淡去
(前首情感错落,较难捉摸。次首的轮廓明显,不过以时间进行度量,而且物人互相比拟,却是别有意趣。)
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February 23, 2017 at 9:18 AM
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February 23, 2017 at 10:38 PM
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