Thursday, February 23, 2017
勇宏:谜语诗
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大树招来
一双无形的手
带走了乌云
迎来了白云
不仅煽动你的心情
也成为有助作者的
一双手
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口中的唾液
流露出它的寿命
即使要奉献自己
把最后一滴
给用尽
也要完成许多的
不朽之名作
(前首过于直露,后两行似无关联。次首比拟稍有唐突,『唾液』该对应『沉默』而非『寿命』。)
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February 23, 2017 at 12:29 AM
风,舌?
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February 23, 2017 at 8:03 AM
风、笔!
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February 23, 2017 at 9:21 AM
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February 24, 2017 at 11:21 PM
第一首蛮可爱的。:)风和笔。
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