Thursday, January 19, 2017
书雅:隐喻诗
总有一天
熨平的皱褶
染白的黑发
是人为做的
也是赤裸裸的
(隐喻未能唤出,题目换成『日子』较妥,后句应是喻体的深化而非说道讲白。)
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