Saturday, October 28, 2017
周舟:猫咪诗
傍晚
是瘸腿的野猫
从胡须分叉的开头
穿过云彩
较为疲倦的部分
用指甲弯弯在
很热很皱的天上
嵌一个印
趁唾液增多而不够多
以一次性的耐心舔化
十粒过期的太阳
(一粒猫/疲倦的/皱着)
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October 30, 2017 at 1:00 AM
之前的三行其实没觉得色情
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kd
October 30, 2017 at 3:37 AM
是我覺得我自己色情。所以就刪了。而且絕對比不上留下來的這首。
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October 30, 2017 at 3:58 PM
确实这首更好:)
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meihui/
November 3, 2017 at 3:03 PM
觉得最后两行特别耐人寻味 :)
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之前的三行其实没觉得色情
ReplyDelete是我覺得我自己色情。所以就刪了。而且絕對比不上留下來的這首。
ReplyDelete确实这首更好:)
Delete觉得最后两行特别耐人寻味 :)
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