Wednesday, August 22, 2018
书雅:文字曝光
嘿-
你看不见?看不见我?不见我吧?
是素颜还是铺了妆?笑着哭或哭了笑?
镜头下方,是惯性裸体还是穿了点什么?
另一头会不会有个人呢?
为何要让你看见?
这只是惹人猜忌的
游戏。
视线模糊因为灯光昏暗。
我不问不听不看,
闭着眼睛训话,
当然
也很想让你知道:
嘿-
我只是有雨加雪。
(文字挑逗着观看的视角,欲盖弥章的手法别致,结尾骤降雨雪似乎有点突兀,不妨在城市的钢骨中取喻。)
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August 28, 2018 at 4:09 PM
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Zhao Na
August 28, 2018 at 4:12 PM
叙述角度很有趣,很新颖,喜欢!
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