Saturday, January 26, 2019
诗媛:诗的诗
诗
用雪白的双足
走出泥泞
用乌黑的瞳仁
寻找光芒
(对比求索的意象明朗,后二句太顾城,不妨互调倒置,产生歧义。)
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梅银
January 26, 2019 at 10:54 PM
我觉得也可以延续顾城,比如说:继续寻找光芒
(浅见而且,哈哈)
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我觉得也可以延续顾城,比如说:继续寻找光芒
ReplyDelete(浅见而且,哈哈)