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原本阴森的故事,在诗的末句竟也透出温馨的感觉
前段控诉现实的无情,末段却颇有意思,从原本的无情,到充满理想与希望,有新意。
第一人称感觉很好
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ReplyDelete原本阴森的故事,在诗的末句竟也透出温馨的感觉
ReplyDelete前段控诉现实的无情,末段却颇有意思,从原本的无情,到充满理想与希望,有新意。
ReplyDelete第一人称感觉很好
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